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The fizzy atoms
rise in the void
fills up to the brim
and spills all around
Boxed and Marooned.
Conditioned responses
Merge with chaos.
The tainted pages
of a diary
and the pebbles
on the glass top
reflects the mood
Parched ground
desire to seek
the personal touch
that dissolved
in oblivion.
The buddha laughs
and the windows open.
Smell of the
burnt words,
fills up the newly painted
room.
Smiles replace
the mild melancholy
And the light shine
On the crystal wings.
~~payal~~
written in response to the prompt at poets on the page.
The fizzy atoms
rise in the void
fills up to the brim
and spills all around
Boxed and Marooned.
Conditioned responses
Merge with chaos.
The tainted pages
of a diary
and the pebbles
on the glass top
reflects the mood
Parched ground
desire to seek
the personal touch
that dissolved
in oblivion.
The buddha laughs
and the windows open.
Smell of the
burnt words,
fills up the newly painted
room.
the mild melancholy
And the light shine
On the crystal wings.
~~payal~~
written in response to the prompt at poets on the page.
Smell of the burnt words yet light shines on crystal wings.
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Thanks a lot dada..:)
Deleteoh my goodness. The rhythm, the pace, the cadence... absolutely wonderful!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Julie..:)
DeleteThe rhthym and words are beautiful. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteThis is brilliant and exactly how I feel today captured in such poetic prose! ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathy..:)
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