rise

                                                                            2014 image,Goa


silence occupied
vacant places in my heart
moon rise in my palm
:
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the sky lanterns rise
empty words turn to ashes
the truth lies in being.
~payal~~



haiku horizons:empty


 
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23 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 22, 2014

    Loved both Haiku. The image is very captivating.

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  2. LocomenteApril 22, 2014

    Lovely thoughts there...

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  3. Deepti AgarwalApril 22, 2014

    Hence the Truth is unfold.. (y)

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  4. ReshmaApril 23, 2014

    Brilliant Haiku Payal, the second one is simply full of wisdom!!

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  5. Tressa April 23, 2014

    Beautiful imagery, well chosen picture.

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  6. Amiya chatterjeeApril 23, 2014

    Hmmmm......The Truth is Resounding silence.

    Captivating Imagery

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  7. AnonymousApril 24, 2014

    This are mesmerizing and haunting with beauty. Good work.

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  8. payal agarwalApril 24, 2014

    Thanks a lot! :)

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  9. UnknownApril 24, 2014

    Beautiful, haunting imagery! ♥

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  10. Reading PleasureApril 25, 2014

    Brilliant and lovely!

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  11. AnonymousApril 26, 2014

    Truth lies in being, soothing words to the soul as we reflect in silence:)

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  12. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 26, 2014

    I like the image of silence in the vacant places...

    An Empty Song

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  13. AnonymousApril 27, 2014

    o Payal , the first one is so sublime ! the last line has a vivid metaphor

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