grab

Gurgaon,2015

Immeasurable
weight of ornated feather
grab a piece of life
:
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grab a piece of life
while reliving memories
behold thy goodness
~~payal~~

haiku horizons
haiku my heart
 
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26 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 14, 2015

    Ow, powerful. Beautifully done and Inspiring.

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  2. rebeccaAugust 14, 2015

    feathers...like prayers from a pure sky; your haiku spoke to me.
    thanks.

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  3. LeaAugust 14, 2015

    If only I could glide through life as easily as your haiku Payal... lovely.

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherAugust 14, 2015

    Immeasurable! Yes, that's life!

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  5. J CAugust 15, 2015

    just lovely Payal. I love feathers. Imagine the stories they could tell from their travels with the breeze.
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/12111551-Feather-by-J-C-Snyder

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    1. payal agarwalAugust 15, 2015

      Thank you for sharing this poem. It's beautiful. :)

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  6. NonnieAugust 15, 2015

    oh, what a lovely tribute! sadly, I've never thought of feathers in this way. thanks for pointing this out to me in such an exquisite haiku!

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  7. Milan RajkumarAugust 15, 2015

    I love the idea of ornated feather grabbing life ,wonderful ,Payal

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  8. Gillena CoxAugust 15, 2015

    light and whimsical

    have a nice Saturday

    much love...

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  9. AnonymousAugust 16, 2015

    Yep, I guess that's what living is all about :D

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  10. Ajay PaiAugust 16, 2015

    once again, the power of your creativity shine through. Loved the usage of ornated feather. It's of a pigeon, I guess and this snap makes me nostalgic. I used to collect these feathers when i was in class 2 and 3 during my vacations at my grandma's. Relived those memories.

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  11. AliceAugust 17, 2015

    What a good feeling from this. :-)

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  12. Amiya chatterjeeAugust 19, 2015

    Birds fly to the sky ( infinity )
    Drops a feather at your doorstep
    Which is a Message from Infinity
    to You. Meditate , and you would know.

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  13. Gillena CoxAugust 22, 2015

    Oh I luv your statement on life here and of course the karumi aspect of your haiku

    Much love..


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