Beyond horizon reached the woods dark;
where the Sun had sprinkled its scarlet hues.
With daggers of actions they left the mark;
for how long will they pay their dues?
:
Where the Sun had sprinkled its scarlet hues;
in liquid thoughts and distilled dreams.
For how long will they pay their dues?
In frosted breath and wondrous themes.
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In liquid thoughts and distilled dreams;
reversing a moment of regret.
In frosted breath and wondrous themes
shedding the burden of upset.
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Reversing a moment of regret;
with daggers of actions they left the mark.
Shedding the burden of upset;
beyond horizon reached the woods dark.
~~payal~~
poetry form: Pantoum
Well done thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot. :)
DeleteGood you cannot be angry for long, I can though be :D
ReplyDeleteGreat poetry love :)
Can't stay disconnected from myself. Being angry for long time doesn't serve the purpose. :) Thank you,Richa.:)
DeleteTo keep anger inside is in itself not a healthy sign..
ReplyDeleteloved your Pantoum..
Getting angry is human, but staying angry is a choice.:)
DeleteI also cannot stay angry for long. Good poetry Payal :)
ReplyDeleteNice to hear that. Thanks Parul. :)
DeleteInteresting poetic form with a message that suggests we let go of both regrets and anger. I liked the imagery as well. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Beth. :)
DeleteSmooth words and the flow makes it a windy breath that passes after some time:)
ReplyDelete:) Thank you.
DeleteNature has a way of calming and soothing us. I'm working on my anger still, Payal.
ReplyDeleteNature teaches us a lot! Thank you Corinne. :)
DeleteAh. So beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks dear. :)
DeleteFreedom from guilt. Such a free feeling from your poem. Freedom of spirit!
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteGreat write, well expressed.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Nithya. :)
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