A phase in my life
Came like a cool breeze
Softly caressed my hair
Whispered in my ears
And made me believe
That I am alive
Like the stillness of the night
It made me listen
To its soothing tunes
And gently transported me
To far beyond..
It tiptoed silently
Took away my breath
With its fragrant spell
Strengthened me and
Made me anew
It passed like a raging storm
Left me bewildered
With dreams in my eyes
But gave me a chance
To rejuvenate and survive
Thereafter it stayed
Within me as my soul
With its intuitive tunes
Sprinkled its dust
And made me whole!
~~payal~~
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I like the last stanza which concludes well the story, sprinkling its dust.Almost like Bibhuti.
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I instantly related with it...ek thandi hawa ke jhonke ki tarah behti jaati hai puri poem... :)
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