2012 image,Goa
In the illuminated corners,
subconsciously manifested,
mysteriously profound
meanings of promises.
Intensely secure
soul connections,
delightful,
entwined
hearts..
Words,
imbued
in silence,
reflect through eyes,
scathed self, some scars deep,
Oceanic abyss.
Sense of realization,
amidst dreams and realities.
Wonders of the mysterious land..
~~payal~~
P.S. tried my hand at nonet and reverse nonet forms of poetry..
Beautiful, Payal. These lines struck me:
ReplyDelete"Words,
imbued
in silence,"
Thanks, I missed you! xoA
Thanks for your kind words Annis :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful nonet! Thank you for playing with us at Poets on the Page!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked..Was missing OctPoWriMo..Thanks a lot for setting up Poets on the Page!:)
DeleteGreat job, Payal. I loved the imagery and also the haunting quality of the words...
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ReplyDeleteWOW your nonet is amazing! Love the progression and the beautiful imagery. ♥
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DeletePayal, this is amazing Nonet and flawless:)
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Thanks..:)
DeleteEvocative thoughts.
ReplyDeleteBut......
hmm..But " One should not count the steps while dancing.." :)
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