Drive

 
                                                                                                                        2014 image, Goa
 


Through the eyes of truth
driven by passionate dreams-
raw perfectionist.

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Raw perfectionist
while driving on the crossroad;
meets rainbow delight.

~~payal~~
haiku horizons

14 comments:

  1. A lovely series of haiku ... and a lovely blog, very cheerful

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    1. Thanks for visiting my blog and for your sweet comments. :)

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  2. Nicely done. To be a perfectionist can be a challenge sometimes.

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    1. Thanks Celestine. Yes, that's true. :)

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  3. AnonymousJuly 17, 2014

    thrilling drives ! the metaphor of rainbow is wonderful Payal !

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  4. Loved both haiku. The first one can really overwhelm and eat you alive if you let it. Love the idea of meeting a rainbow. Brilliant!

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  5. Raw Perfectionist.. Interesting :)

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  6. Perfect meeting of Two raw lunatically Perfectionists.
    Go Dance at the meeting girl.

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  7. Being a perfectionist is not really a perfect idea. There are tolls to pay and suffering to weather. Great haiku.

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  8. Loved the cascade Payal, raw perfectionist, rainbow at the crossroads make for lovely word play.

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