Remembrance

2015 image,Goa



When frozen hearts melt,
restlessness turns red and leave.
I remember you.
~~payal~~


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28 comments:

  1. UppalJanuary 23, 2015

    cute picture ,Payal!

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  2. J CJanuary 23, 2015

    Remembering is good. It reminds us of what made that frozen heart to begin with. Good thoughts here.

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  3. LauraJanuary 23, 2015

    So, so tender… beautiful.

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 23, 2015

    Remembering is probably something most of us should do more of.

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  5. deb did itJanuary 23, 2015

    sweet remembrance ! and thank you for sweet birthday greetings !!

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  6. gmaJanuary 23, 2015

    I remember you.
    :-)

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  7. Annie JeffriesJanuary 24, 2015

    I like the double meaning of leave that sneaks in here.

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  8. foxysueJanuary 24, 2015

    Really lovely, soft and soothing...x

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  9. Amrita SabatJanuary 24, 2015

    very well written! restlessness ends where frozen hearts melt! :)

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 24, 2015

    I take a bow, Payal. Small but lovely Haiku expressing feeling straight from the heart:)

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  11. joshi danielJanuary 24, 2015

    colorful :)

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  12. rebeccaJanuary 25, 2015

    so tender, so honoring, your remembrance.

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  13. Gillena CoxJanuary 25, 2015

    layers and layers of meanings; Nice

    have a good week

    much love...

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    1. payal agarwalJanuary 25, 2015

      Thanks a lot Gillena. Wish you the same..:)

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  14. Ajay PaiJanuary 25, 2015

    Hey Payal! You are a 'Punter' in Haiku. Am an ardent fan now of the Haiku Poems.

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