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| Gurgaon, 2016 |
mind was filled with endless chatter
destined encounters cleared the haze
drawing attention to all that matter
games every moment life plays
strips of thoughts with winds scatter
syllabled moments in moony maze
~~payal~~
~~payal~~
Mind keep playing its part, and thoughts never seem to abandon. Some thoughts weigh us down, while others lift us up. Let's stay aware of what we think, for thoughts create our realities. Be kind, be thoughtful, think positive.
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That is a beautiful poem.The annotation is a novel idea and helpful.I missed reading your poems for long.I shall try to be regular
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DeleteLoved this! Enjoyed the read.
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DeleteI don't read a lot of poems, but I liked this one. :)
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DeleteVery dreamy, and I love the last line with the ...moony maze :)
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Deletegood poem..
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DeleteBeautifully woven, Payal. Mind is always filled with endless chatter. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Vinitha. :)
Delete"syllabled moments in moony maze" loved it..
ReplyDeletehmm.. thanks. :)
DeleteInteresting! I do not write poems or read much, but like the essence here.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Parul. :)
DeleteThat was quite thoughtful..! Loved the positivity in it :)
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DeleteGood job on this thank you for sharing
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
Deleteoh the monkey mind! to stay positive is very challenging with such a monkey mind..
ReplyDeleteI understand but it's not impossible. Thanks for the read, Ajay. :)
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