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Saharanpur, 2016 |
Burnt edges of rough curled leaves smelt of invincible rain that somehow stayed back in frozen footsteps on the white shimmering streets.
Strong steady branches that flowered once on a stony path look like ghosts in the night. Sunlight in the morning clears the haze and we quietly indulge in heavenly taste of melted snow.
~~payal~~
p.s. This leaf was lying lonely in my dad's garden. He brought it inside, and placed it well along with his favourite money plant. It became my muse for Day 2.
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Sounds like a bleak winter's day that suddenly comes alive in the sunlight. Very poetic.
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Suzy. :)
DeleteFelt like the opening lines of a beautiful book...
ReplyDelete..and that's the sweetest comment. Thank you, Sheethal. :)
DeleteThe way you've woven the words of a simple burnt leaf, simply splendid!
ReplyDeleteThanks dear. :)
DeleteI loved the burnt patterns on the leaves. Beautiful words :)
ReplyDeleteThank you. That's the beauty of nature. :)
DeleteYour muse is truly inspiring Parul.....lovely words...
ReplyDeleteIndeed! I loved all the shades in this naturally burnt leaf. Thank you.:) Google keeps auto correcting my name.:)
DeleteA burnt leaf, and such a beautiful post emerges from it! Just amazing :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Mithila. :)
DeleteLove every word, Payal. It ushers in freshness and magic:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vishal. :)
Deletebeautiful, both the image of it and the words the "lonely leaf" inspired.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dorothee. :)
DeleteImaginative flow. Thank you for this
ReplyDeleteThank you, Martin. :)
DeletePoetic!
ReplyDeleteThanks Parul. :)
DeleteBeautiful words Payal, that leaf is so dramatic
ReplyDeleteRegards
Tina
Just tried to unfold the drama. Thank you Tina. :)
DeleteEvery aspect of nature is truly inspiring...well written
ReplyDeleteIt is. Thanks a lot. :)
DeletePayal ! I seriously didn't understand this properly. It seems I need still more time to mature :)
ReplyDeleteTake your time, bhaiya.. I'm in no hurry. :)
DeleteYou gave life to that burnt leaf via those words :)
ReplyDelete:) Thanks Ruchira!
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