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| Miramar, Goa |
She kept walking, on the curvy slope, far from the
crowd, towards the sea, fearlessly, when
all at once she felt the need to relax. Sitting quietly on the brick wall , she could feel the turbulent
weather. The waves roared within, gripping her tightly.
Reminiscing the days bygone, sitting there talking to her
shadows. Holding on to hope, waiting
happily, for the new morning. She took a few more steps to face the tides.
Just then moist air touched her, she could smell the sea.
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It's so beautifully woven and expressing sensitivity:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vishal! :)
DeleteHey Payal, There is a great solace in the sea and the water! true that
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Yes!! Thank you. :)
DeleteSoulful words emphasizing the mind's turbulence! I love your beautiful header!
ReplyDeleteThank you Kala. :)
DeleteThat paints a vivid imagery! I'd like to be such like place too!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpa. :)
DeleteThat's such a beautiful description. Loved reading.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Darshana. :)
DeleteYou have captured a beautiful moment, and it comes to life:-) Felt like I could close my eyes and smell the sea myself:-)
ReplyDeleteThat's sweet. Thank you Eli.:)
DeletePicturesque...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sunaina. :)
DeleteVery beautiful just like the sea and the depth.
ReplyDeleteThank Parul. :)
Deleteto be able to get lost in the beauty of the sea... Lovely!!
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Thanks Rajlakshmi. :)
Deletei Payal, very beautifully written and the write up captures and beautiful moment.
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Tina
Thanks Tina. :)
DeleteSo lovely. Love the descriptions and most of all, the sea!
ReplyDeleteThanks Esha. :)
Deleteand we can smell it too now..love this
ReplyDeleteThank you Brenda. :)
DeleteThank you for this elegance
ReplyDeleteThank you, Martin. :)
DeleteLovely image!
ReplyDeleteThanks. :)
DeleteSea, nature ... so soothing and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sheethal. :)
DeleteAWesome. "Just then moist air touched her, she could smell the sea". These liners tell me that at the end, there is hope for the protagonist. A post exuding hope.
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