2013 image,Goa
Strong vibes,
bring along
subtle messages
and form
images in mind.
****
Beyond,
the strong walls
of reasoning,
I try to listen
to my heart.
****
In silence,
sometimes
the heart sees
what is invisible
to the eye.
~~payal~~
wednesday prompt 2014- 4:write tribe
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This is spot on. Intuition and premonition...and we can sense things that isn't visible. I loved your eloquent poem! ♥
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DeleteBeautiful poem! I loved the second stanza...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tarang. :)
DeleteGreat!! The prompt is very brilliantly handled by you. the heart is indeed the ruler.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ma'am! :)
DeleteI like the second stanza...it captures the struggle. In a world where we are so encouraged to apply reason and make the "smart" choices, in a world where we have to do so...it takes effort to reach beyond for that un-reasoned but no less valid heart-choice. I try...but often fail. Nice poem. :-)
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ReplyDeleteIt's so beautiful, Payal. Love every word in this inspiring poem:)
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