Presence # Day 3


                                                                                                                                                2013 image,Goa

It’s a matter of choice,
On life’s bent.
Acceptance shortens the distance.
Together we rejoice
being present       
in slightly flavoured existence
 
:
On a bright sunny day
Here I dwell
In this land where metaphors breathe.
Sweet nothings all the way
In clean shells
Shine through sequined transparent sheathe.
:
Festivities galore
Hope fills me
With doses of tranquility.
Treasure in my heart’s core
Sets me free
With message of humility.
~~payal~~

Poetry form :Tri-fall written for OctPoWriMo 2014
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21 comments:

  1. Vinay Leo R.October 03, 2014

    Ah. I seem to be dwelling in the land of verse too, but here it is beautifully rainy :) but happiness can be found where we want it I guess.

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  2. AnonymousOctober 03, 2014

    ..in the land where metaphors breathe..I love this line:)- Nicely done!

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    1. payal agarwalOctober 03, 2014

      Thanks! :)

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    2. seekingmemeOctober 04, 2014

      I have to agree - what a wonderful line! And a beautiful poem! So glad you're a part of OctPoWriMo again!

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    3. payal agarwalOctober 04, 2014

      Thanks much Amy. :)

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  3. payal agarwalOctober 03, 2014

    Thanks Lizzi :)

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  4. SunitaOctober 03, 2014

    I thought my comment will be the first one :P The moment you posted this, I commented. Its brilliant Payal :)

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  5. UnknownOctober 04, 2014

    Lovely!!

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  6. ChristineOctober 04, 2014

    I love your word choices in this lovely poem! It just floats along, elegant and evocative.

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  7. Tamara WoodsOctober 04, 2014

    Payal love this line: Shine through sequined transparent sheathe.

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  8. TO TOUCH THE HORIZONOctober 04, 2014

    Festivities galore..true. All in the mood. loved the poem.

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  9. Lady WhispersOctober 04, 2014

    This is very lovely. Nice one.

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  10. Amiya chatterjeeOctober 05, 2014

    Absolutely resounding.
    In the nature everything accepts
    thats why nature is so pretty.

    Acceptance shortens the distance.

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