Purple dreams #Day 17


honey will
of gorgeous moon
sprayed the mist
of raw love

thousand mad storms
chant deliriously
in purple forest
of my dreams.
~~payal~~
#OctPoWriMo Day 17

22 comments:

  1. woww..that was quick n sweet

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  2. I adore the second verse! Delirious chanting conveys great images. Well done, Payal!!

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  3. Alas, my word magnets are strewn upon the floor in the basement, yet to be reclaimed.
    Nice work with this arrangement.

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  4. Inever come up with anything near coherent from my magnets never mind something lovely!

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  5. I really enjoyed this! You did so great with the arrangement.
    It sounded magical yet mysterious.

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  6. "sprayed the mist of raw love"
    What a great image! Enjoyed this one very much!

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    1. Thanks a lot Amy. I wanted to do this collage poetry since long but I was just being lazy. Glad you gave us a chance.:)

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  7. Wow. Quite good work this ends up as.

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  8. Some like minded thoughts enchant the mind :)

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  9. Very vivid imagery. Mention the moon, and already I'm hooked!

    It's fascinating to see the words and arrangements others chose...and I'm glad I ended up here!

    On another note, my 10 year old daughter is in love with your blog hader!

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    1. Thanks a lot Shan. That's really sweet. Lots of love to your daughter. :)

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  10. Blog HEADER. Maybe I should reread BEFORE I press 'Publish'....

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