A few damp leaves
Left their imprints
In written words
In the pages of an
old book
:
melancholy of cloudy
bits
blurred the vision.
In twilight,
Raindrops kissed
the bruised blades of
grass.
~~payal~~OctPoWriMo #Day 19
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Both are very beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Fifi. :)
Deleteraindrops kissed the bruised blades of grass - absolutely beautiful! A masterpiece once again, Payal!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rod. :)
DeleteI can almost smell the rain in this one.
ReplyDeleteGlad you can... Thanks Diana. :)
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteso incredibly lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks again Rod. :)
DeleteI love the imagery of the last two lines.
ReplyDeleteThanks Tamara. :)
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