It's October again!
A time to break the walls
Of the shiny chrysalis
And set myself free.
It’s time,
To dive within
and break-open the boxed treasure
That lies chained in the false notions
And hold me back.
It’s time to trust
And fly free
To embrace myselfAnd be me!
~~payal~~
This post is a part of OctPoWriMo 2014 and UBC
Also linking it to WW-54
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Lovely :)
ReplyDeleteThanks!:)
Delete"...chained in the false notions..." Lovely image! I'm glad you're a part of OctPoWriMo again.
ReplyDeleteThanks Amy! Glad to be a part of it again. :)
DeleteI would be happy if you didnt mention " October " as your poem is picturing very tenderly about Nature inside and nature outside and about FREEDOM.
ReplyDeleteI get your words..Thanks a lot!! :)
DeleteI can feel you flying in your words. Welcome and well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Julie.:)
DeleteAbsolutely lovely Payal, great beginning! Thank you for sharing with OctPoWriMo
ReplyDeleteThanks Morgan! :)
DeleteA beautiful way to begin OctPoWriMo, well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks much. :)
DeleteI especially love the second stanza. Beautifully done.
ReplyDeletePayal, I tend to fall away from visiting after October ( sorry) but I so remember enjoying your poetry from last year ( really I do) I am looking forward to spending time here again.
ReplyDeleteOh dear..it's ok and a big thank you for showing your support.:)
DeleteTrust and fly free...Nice Payal...:)-
ReplyDeleteBeautiful opening for fall!
ReplyDeleteThanks Charli :)
DeleteAmen to a new chapter!
ReplyDeleteThanks for linking up your wonderful capture n your creation, Payal :)
Thanks Ruchira. Always a pleasure.:)
DeleteLove it. If this is how you fly free looks like it will be a great month here!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lance. :)
DeleteAhaaaa ...You were born not in " October" but when the whole nature is in suspense for the Autumn's farewell, the Sehnai in nature is playing the Lalit Raag , the rag of tearful "Baul " singers singing the songs of some what tranquility , The nature has now little to do but smilingly rememberig all the seasons laughters and cryings behind. Nature is preparing for Romantic shivers , for Winter to arrive. To nature there is no "October or November etc " Nature sings different Raag for different moods.
ReplyDeleteYour words! Thanks you. :)
DeleteThe second stanza really held some lovely phrases for me. Thanks for sharing at OctPoWriMo!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Tamara.:)
DeleteYes :) Break free and be you. Even after OctPoWriMo perhaps.
ReplyDeleteOfcourse! Thanks Vinay. :)
DeleteThank you Andrea. :)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem and so full of beauty and hope! Great beginning for OctPoWriMo!
ReplyDeleteThanks Georgia. :)
Deletequite charming imagery.
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