2012 image,Goa
Once upon a time,
There was a story,
Timeless..
That neither had a beginning
Nor an end.
Not too long ago,
The clouds swallowed the stars
And the moon hid in despair,
Time was tough
weather was rough
The trees were burning
The flowers smelt like ashes
When a grain of sand
Chose to become a pearl.
:
and there..
They lived!
~~payal~~
#OctPoWriMo Day 16
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Finally, you got there :)Written well!
ReplyDeleteYes, yes...I am happy! :)
DeleteResilience takes us places!
ReplyDeleteIndeed! Thanks. :)
Delete...happily ever after! Bravo.
ReplyDeleteThanks Viv ! :)
DeleteI like this, especially that whole second stanza. Great imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jessica. :)
DeleteI love a story with no end:)
ReplyDelete:) Thanks. :)
Delete'when a grain of sand chose to become a pearl'...I love that line! Well done, Payal!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rod. :)
DeleteBeautiful language. Very pretty and intense. :-)
ReplyDeleteVery nice ...talk about your happily ever after!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lance. :)
Deletelovely story.. hmmm
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DeleteA magical tale ... loved it! Bastet.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot. :)
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