Creativity #Day 8


2014 image, Gurgaon






Captivating glory of full moon

Retrieved the eclipsed boundaries

Enticing silver charm   

Added to the myths

That attributed to our madness

In artistic world of words

Vibrantly reflecting the moods

In the sparkling ink

Travelling together through different phases

You,my moon, have witnessed my sleepless nights.

17 comments:

  1. Ooh, that last line is ace!

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  2. That last line was on point! Also loved these lines: That attributed to our madness

    In artistic world of words

    Vibrantly reflecting the moods.

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  3. Oh. the moon has witnessed many a sleepless night of mine too, and coz of that, witnessed me writing poems as well. No company quite like that moon :)

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  4. Nice Payal. I love acrostics, but most times my lines feel like a paragraph:)- I did that with the A to Z challenge and boy- talk about paragraphs. :)-

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    1. Thanks! Was quite busy in April so couldn't participate in A-Z. I love acrostics.:) I read yours. It's really good.:)

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  5. Another gem of an acrostic from your end Payal :)

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  6. Loved it, Payal
    The last line had all the meaning n the action :)

    Thanks for linking up...pleasure to have you onboard!

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  7. Beautiful image. Words full of meaning laden with aspirations and hope:)

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  8. Beautiful words filled with hope.

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