Waves # Day 4

                                                                                                                                             2014 image,Goa


Revolutionary waves arise,

Once in every season

When the sea is churning

and the clouds are too full

to contain the secrets.


The whispers become noise

 and then guided by an unknown force

These waves wash away

illusion of embellished facades

All man-made.

 
Silent sea re-awakens

And the waves create history.

The world heals and

nurses its’ wounds

the candle keeps burning

~~payal~~

OctPoWriMo 2014 # Day 4
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28 comments:

  1. Angela van SonOctober 04, 2014

    Brilliant. I used to be a historian, the way you put it really speaks to me. I'd use it in class if I was a teacher.

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  2. vivinfranceOctober 04, 2014

    A delightful poem. Powerful ocean yet gentle.

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  3. AnonymousOctober 04, 2014

    This is lovely:)

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  4. Lance SmithOctober 04, 2014

    Not much I can say that others haven't - excellent.

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  5. Tomichan MatheikalOctober 04, 2014

    Nice. The earth, thankfully, has a way of bringing back life again and again.

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  6. Vinay Leo R.October 04, 2014

    Loved it. It's like a tsunami in a poem, this. :) The photo too, of the agitated waves. Out of curiosity, where was it taken? Vivekananda Rock?

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    1. payal agarwalOctober 04, 2014

      It's Donapaula, Goa. :) Thanks Vinay. :)

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  7. Anna K. StewartOctober 05, 2014

    "Clouds are too full to contain the secrets" Love that line. The imagery is lovely!

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  8. AnonymousOctober 05, 2014

    I love that first stanza.

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  9. UnknownOctober 05, 2014

    Oh I love the continuity of this. How life keeps rolling on. Brilliant! ♥

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  10. Amiya chatterjeeOctober 05, 2014

    Perfect harmony and balance.

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  11. Michelle LiewOctober 05, 2014

    I love the spirit of this. The waves can destroy, yet nurture!! Lovely to meet a fellow poet, and you bet we'll have lots to share!

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  12. payal agarwalOctober 05, 2014

    :) Thank you Lizzi. :)

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  13. Fida IslaihOctober 05, 2014

    Amazing!

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  14. AnonymousOctober 06, 2014

    This was really beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.

    God bless you,
    Cheryl

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  15. SunitaOctober 07, 2014

    Enchanting expressions :)

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