Wanderers

 

                                                           Goa, 2020

Wanderer of the dreamy land

Travelling through the reveries

Lost and found in the memories 

A vagabond in the woodland, 

Fill the cracks beside railway tracks

In the light rests sparkling on sand

Sun-kissed nomadic treasuries

Wanderers return to their land.

-payal

29/10/2020

It's day 29 of OctPoWriMo

The Octain, full name Octain Refrain, is a form of poetry developed by English poet Luke Prater in December 2010.


It comprises eight lines as two tercets and a couplet, either as octosyllables (counting eight syllables per line), or as iambic tetrameter, whichever is preferable. Trochaic tetrameter also acceptable. The latter yields a more propulsive rhythm, as opposed to iambs, which lilt.


As the name suggests, the first line is a refrain, repeated as the last (some variation of refrain acceptable). Rhyme-scheme as follows -


A-b-b

a-c/c-a

b-A


3 comments:

  1. :)... wanderers return to their land .... :) much needed..

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  2. Lost and found in the memories - I resonated most with this. Beautiful

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  3. Wanderers go back to their homeland, beautifully expressed.

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