Stardust falls and sprinkles on entangled knots,
The grip loosens and give clarity of thoughts.
Amazing reflections in season of change,
Reflecting empowered vision in world strange.
Confined in the clutches of sensitive tales,
Walking on the edge of long nettlesome trails.
Finding tranquility in noise all around,
A moment of silence in my heart I found.
Walking in the nature feeling the cool breeze,
Vibrant colours all around, moments I seize.
Stardust falls and sprinkles on entangled knots
The grip loosens and give clarity of thoughts.
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Amazing reflections in season of change,
Reflecting empowered vision in world strange.
Yellowed autumn leaves fell and scattered on ground,
Like scathed memories and notes in closet found.
Golden glow of inner truth word weaver weaves,
Like bright sunlight falling on Ashoka leaves.
Hope shines through baring heart,this season of fall,
Healing through serene, trustworthy nature's call.
Letting it all emerge from depth of the sea,
Enriching experiences filled with glee.
Stardust falls and sprinkles on entangled knots,
The grip loosens and give clarity of thoughts.
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Confined in the clutches of sensitive tales,
Walking on the edge of long nettlesome trails.
Headed to the center, flowing like a river,
Intuitive senses slides like a sliver.
Crisp skyflakes like unattended memories,
Kept seeping through the glass prism of reveries.
While restoring sanity through forgiveness,
Transformation brought in feel of aliveness.
Painting canvas in innumerable hues,
Refreshes the senses, and wipes off the blues.
Stardust falls and sprinkles on entangled knots
The grip loosens and give clarity of thoughts.
-payal
5/10/2020
It's Day 5 of #OctPoWriMo and I have attempted shape poetry as well as Licentia rhyme form.
The Licentia Rhyme Form, a poetic form created by Laura Lamarca, consists of at least 3 12-line stanzas with 11 syllables per line. Of course, the poem can be elongated adding on to the following rhyme scheme: aabbccddeeAA, BBffgghhiiAA, CCjjkkllmmAA
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Stunning pieces.. both of them stole my heart....
ReplyDeleteThanks dear. Writing them was quite difficult. 😊
DeleteBoth are wonderful, beautiful pieces Payal!
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DeleteWow, Payal! I loved these poems. The shape poem was beautifully done. And, a deep bow to you for doing the Licentia Rhyme. I looked at the description and knew I didn't have that one in me today. Hugs, xoA
ReplyDeleteThank you!😊
DeleteAmazing. I am impressed and inspired by your work - thank you!
ReplyDeleteWonderful! Loved the way you have expressed in the given form of poetry. I enjoyed the read.
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