Moon, star, and the lights 2020
Smile, and get rid of all the doubts,
Shine like a star in the dark night,
Hidden at times, behind the clouds,
Stories evolve, and come to light.
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Caught in jars, kept on pedestal,
Fireflies on a rainy night,
Like washed leaves, and shining petals,
Stories evolve, and come to light.
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Hope emerges, twinkling with glee,
Forming constellations, on a starry night,
Sitting in silence, worries flee,
Stories evolve, and come to light
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Smile, and get rid of all the doubts,
Stories evolve, and come to light.
-payal
1/10/2020
Kyrielle Sonnet
A Kyrielle Sonnet consists of 14 lines (three rhyming quatrain stanzas and a non-rhyming couplet). Just like the traditional Kyrielle poem, the Kyrielle Sonnet also has a repeating line or phrase as a refrain (usually appearing as the last line of each stanza). Each line within the Kyrielle Sonnet consists of only eight syllables. French poetry forms have a tendency to link back to the beginning of the poem, so common practice is to use the first and last line of the first quatrain as the ending couplet. This would also re-enforce the refrain within the poem. Therefore, a good rhyming scheme for a Kyrielle Sonnet would be:
AabB, ccbB, ddbB, AB -or- AbaB, cbcB, dbdB, AB.
I am participating in OctPoWriMo 2020 and it's Day 1.
Ahaa what a beautiful piece created... ♥
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DeleteThat is a beautiful poem. Such hope and serenity in each line. Welcome back :)
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DeleteBeautifully penned, a lovely poem.
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DeleteLovely - happy to be sharing this journey with you!
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DeleteI really like this one, Payal! Nice to see your poems again. xoA
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DeleteSo evocative. Great job, Payal!
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