Goa,2020
Bruising,
Fooling,
Burning,
Cooling,
Insensitive, bruising, fooling, games
Smell of smoke from burning, cooling, flames.
.
Longest
Wrongest
Strongest
Modest
This has been the longest, wrongest year.
We shall come out strongest, modest, dear.
Wounded and shattered
with shards of experiences,
Diverted from the path,
Falling into abyss,
Light found on the way,
Celebrating victory
over the demons,
that kept holding back,
Me, from myself.
Prayerful
Careful
Dareful
Thoughtful
Indulging in prayerful, careful ways.
Walking through the dareful, thoughtful, days.
Letting go of steam,
with forgiveness,
Smoke rises up in spirals,
finding new facets of
Life, and filling the space with love!
-payal
10/10/2020
It's Day 10 of OctPoWriMo, and I have written a free form with Tyburn in between.
Tyburn
A six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables.
The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third, and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.
Ahaa kya baat hai.. good job with the prompt format and words
ReplyDeleteThank you behna. Haan..that results in a new format of my own.:P I had a lot to write today.
DeleteI'm still at the wounded and shattered point.
ReplyDeleteGreat job with the prompt!
No Forgiveness
Thank you!
DeleteI love the combined forms. This poem is wonderful and full of hope.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jennifer.
Deletegreat work!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteWonderful! I like what you have done here.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteWell done, we will rise again.
ReplyDeleteThanks Nithya!
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