Thoughts create stories in the mind,
Ripples form, one of its kind.
Unmatched words and acts for momentary gains,
Heart knows to endure and heal pain.
Pain made her stronger,
Stronger since she opened her eyes,
Eyes reflected her soul,
Soul never believed in lies white.
Quality of thoughts govern the life,
Raising vibrations in moments of strife,
Change of perception helps when stuck in time
Reality might differ, freely we rhyme.
Rhyme and rhythm flows in heart.
Heartfelt words touch the core,
Core of being is serene and calm.
Calm is the feeling that picks us up.
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Hearts hold the secrets deep,
With faith we grow and take a leap,
The shining core, frame the solutions,
Practical spirituality dissolves whimsical notions.
-payal
9/10/2020
Day 9 of OctPoWriMo
Loop Poetry is a poetry form created by Hellon. There are no restrictions on the number of stanzas nor on the syllable count for each line. In each stanza, the last word of the first line becomes the first word of line two, last word of line 2 becomes the first word of line 3, last word of line 3 becomes the first word of line 4. This is followed for each stanza. The rhyme scheme is abcb.
Variations:
1. Stanzas, writers choice on the number, no rhyming, the last word, first word scheme is maintained.
2. One long stanza, no limit on number of lines, no rhyming scheme, the last word, first word scheme is maintained.
3. Couplets mixed with 4 line stanzas, the last word, first word scheme is maintained in the stanzas. It can also be used in the couplets. Rhyme scheme is ab, cc, defg, hh, ii, jklm, nn, oo.
With faith we grow and take a leap.... Beautiful...
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A beautiful ripple of thoughts, I enjoyed reading.
ReplyDeletePractical spirituality is an idea that resonates with me. I don't do well with being told to believe something or else.
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Ripples that spread and touch unexpected shores! Lovely poem
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