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Goa,2012 |
With the first sip,
I found it bitter,
To make it better,
I added some sugar
and stirred cautiously
for some time,
In the meantime,
I lost my rhyme.
:
It was time to indulge
In your exotic flavour
But when I tasted,
you had turned cold.
:
I didn’t have a choice
Either I had to take you bitter
Or I had to take you cold.
So now I leave my
thoughts behind
Not to forget,
some habits are old.
:
No, it’s not a blame
game
There was a genuine
hurt
We all make mistakes,
we all do.
How you take it,
it’s all upto you.
As bunch of apologies
float on the surface
I fail to understand
What went wrong that day
Was it wrong with you dear Cappuccino
Or was it me who got carried away?
~~payal~~
It's Day 19 of #OctPoWriMo
Please make the choice of Letter size Friendly to partially blind old readers Payal.
ReplyDeleteSo sorry for this font size dada. Shall keep it mind next time. Thank you for your visit. As for now, i'll mail it to you. :)
DeleteBravo! loved this one :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot. :)
DeleteVery light and flows well!
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteNow this put a smile on my face...cute!
ReplyDeleteflavors needed indeed,
ReplyDeletesmart metaphors.
Thank you. :)
DeleteAwwww. There's so much beneath the foam of this. ;) Excellent.
ReplyDelete:) Thanks a lot.
DeleteThat image of a cold winter evening and the poetess with her cappuccino, I could visualize the poem from here! Lovely poem Di. :)
ReplyDeleteI like your metaphor of the coffee . Clever and creative.
ReplyDeleteA bunch of apologies floating to the surface....very nice line!
Thanks a lot. :)
DeleteNicely penned, great write.
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteOh such cool cappuccino story.. i m sure it was perfectly fine only yr thoughts wandered and so good that they did.
ReplyDeleteyes, thanks. :)
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