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| Goa,2015 |
On a pair of crystal swans
well placed in the niche
Gracefully they remind me
Of pure soulmate connections
:
broken bridges
needs amend
to reach the other end.
~~payal~~
It's Day 14 of #OctPoWriMo
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beautiful! we have so many closed back roads around here due to broken bridges. Yes they need to be mended before they are of any use again...whether metaphorically or otherwise. well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Janet. :)
DeleteNice Payal ... I loved both your tanka and haiku ... Bastet
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DeleteLove the way you did this!
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DeleteLast lines...<3
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DeleteSo beautiful. :)
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DeleteBeautifully written!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nithya. :)
DeleteAhaa.. :)
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DeleteSo true on the haiku. A nice one Payal.
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