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2015, from the flight |
I step in a fairyland
Where the clouds formed castles
And then moved away
...dismantling them.
With the direction of
the wind
New shapes emerged
From the integrated
fragments
The child within me
Learnt to silently observe
The playful clouds.
Clouds still remain the same.
As I sit down
Beneath the night sky
In the blink of an eye
Constellations disappear.
Wrapped in a white cloud
Of consciousness
I let my imagination float
Higher and higher.
~~payal~~
Lovely beginning Payal, glad to have you along for the OctPoWriMo Journey!
ReplyDeleteThank you Morgan. :)
DeleteBravo Payal ... a lovey poem and so happy to see you here! :) Bastet
ReplyDeleteSame here. :)Thanks a lot.
Deleteahaa and you made me float higher n higher with your soothing words..
ReplyDeleteGlad I could. Thanks. :)
DeleteI've always loved clouds. It's a bit of a sad commentary on the world I live in that I now have to consciously allow my imagination to see wondrous things in the shapes.
ReplyDelete"imagination is the beginning of creation." Thanks a lot. :)
DeleteHi Payal, I changed my moniker to Ivy but I was zoe last year... had attracted a troll and changed... but its nice to see you doing this again! I love your poetry every year!
ReplyDeleteSo happy to see you again! Hope you are well. :)
DeleteYour poem Takes me to another Poem.
ReplyDelete" If you open yourself to the Tao
You are at one with the Tao,
and you can embody it completely.
Open yourself to the Tao
Then trust Your natural responses
And everything will fall into place."
Thanks a lot dada. :)
DeleteWowie! I am still floating...loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
DeleteThis is very fluid!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot. :)
DeleteI missed your soft, beautiful voice! Lovely first poem of the month, dear.
ReplyDeleteThat's really sweet of you. Thanks a lot. :)
DeleteBeauteous! :) Encore! Encore!
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
Deletelove the fairyland clouds!
ReplyDeleteme too! Thanks.:)
DeleteBeautiful, Payal ~ Great to see your words again this year.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
xoA
Thank you Annis. :)
DeleteA lovely poem, enjoyed reading.
ReplyDeleteThank you Nithya. :)
DeleteBeautiful and it is delightful to read your beautiful words. I'm happy to see you again this year and look forward to more.
ReplyDeleteThanks! Same here. :)
DeleteLovely, good to see you here Payal:)
ReplyDeleteOh, so very lovely. I particularly felt the passage about the clouds and the constellations. Brilliant and evocative!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much,Shan. :)
DeleteLovely imagery.
ReplyDeleteThanks. :)
DeleteThis is so very lovely, Payal. I love the imagery and I almost feel a sense of floating along with your words. Well done.
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