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| Gurgaon, 2015 |
Clouds of doubt engulf the clear sky
Lifeless trails of
memories keep floating by
Often I find the moon
wrapped in silvery gleam
Umpteenth layer of masked conspiracy it seems.
Dreamy adventures overshadow obstinate beliefs
Sun shines in the heart
and gives relief.Umpteenth layer of masked conspiracy it seems.
Dreamy adventures overshadow obstinate beliefs
~~payal~~
It's #OctPoWriMo Day 28
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Nice Acrostic poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot. :)
DeleteThis truly moved me!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Carol. :)
DeleteBravo for the acrostic - not an easy form to make sense. Your use of assonance makes it really nice to read.
ReplyDeleteYou have some confused singular/plurals which it may help to edit - lines 1 4 and 5. The speed with which we are all writing for Octpo is responsible! .
Done! Thank you so much Vivin for pointing it out! :) Truly appreciate it. Glad you like the acrostic. :)
DeleteMarvellous!
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
Delete"Umpteenth layer of masked conspiracy it seems." wow
ReplyDeleteThankfully sun shines bringing in relief.. :)
hmm.. :)
DeleteIn Bangla I quote .. " Megh dekhey tui korishna Bhoy, Araley tar Surjo hasey "
ReplyDeleteDont be afraid of Clouds, Behind that the Sun laughs.