Tell me now
What keeps you awake
In the deep dark
hours of night?
I'll send across notes of
joy
Catch spoonful of
stars,
-twinkling light.
~~payal~~
syllable count : 3-5-7--7-5-3
It's Day 6 of #OctPoWriMo 2015
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ahaaa twinkling is what I Love..
ReplyDeletegorgeous!
ReplyDeleteI do need them..
ReplyDeleteLife and what goes in keeps me awake most of te time. .
But then that is what life is all about. .
:)
Very soulful!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, love the way you have expressed!
ReplyDeleteAwww! What a sweet and romantic poem!
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Beautiful!
ReplyDeletePlease replace with
ReplyDelete" I shall send you Chopin's piano concerto
The thing that keeps me awake at night is my job, actually! During the day, it's rude people who don't respect the fact that I work nights and see fit to call at all hours.
ReplyDeleteI've always been a night owl. The stars make me feel peaceful.
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Very sweet ... and I'll catch your spoon full of stars ... Bastet
ReplyDeleteThe way you weaved I can imagine the stars playing beautifully:)
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