Beware



Goa, 2015
 
 
In the energy field

There is no place to hide.

 Beware, O’ Man,

Stay true,

For you know not

what all you might lose

When the mask falls off.
~~payal~~

It's Day 18 of #OctPoWriMo
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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 18, 2015

    I particularly like the brevity of the poem. Few words, deep meaning. That last 2 lines wrap it up beautifully ☺

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  2. grams ramblingsOctober 18, 2015

    We all need to beware the mask falling off. See my response to the prompt today:
    gramswisewords.blogspot.com

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  3. SunitaOctober 18, 2015

    True and spirited poem :)

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  4. MiskyOctober 18, 2015

    Very deep.

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  5. Carol CampbellOctober 18, 2015

    Profound. The brevity adds to that!

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  6. AnonymousOctober 18, 2015

    Very poignant...brevity gives this poem power.

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  7. Here, There be a WriterOctober 19, 2015

    That is very deep. It's beautiful.

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  8. Nithya VenkatOctober 19, 2015

    Wisdom in your words, great write.

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  9. Deepti AgarwalOctober 19, 2015

    Behind the mask nobody knows what resides..

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  10. Amiya chatterjeeOctober 19, 2015

    Ufffff Powerful sermon.

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  11. lonelylullabiesOctober 20, 2015

    The very first line gave me what I wanted from the poem and the last two lines were like warnings for the ignorance! Bravo!!

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  12. payal agarwalOctober 20, 2015

    Thank you all. :)

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