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| 2015, Goa |
Standing on
the foothills
Of the
Western Ghats
As they open
the pages of
A dream
diary
Their eyes
begin to speak
in the monsoon.
fallen leaves
scattered here and there
gave an impact of the storm
that just passed by.
Waterfall
flowed
through
the
rocky surface
as they engraved their love
On the stone.
An old tree became witness.
Clouds melt
and kiss the earth
as if to applaud
their sizzling chemistry.
I stop, pause, and reflect.
The time stops.
~~payal~~Day 2 #OctPoWriMo 2015
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Truly beautiful. When it's real love, it deserves to be remembered by the entire Cosmos! :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Adam. :)
DeleteOh nature says a lot more than we realize.
ReplyDeleteYes, it does Lux.:)
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks. :)
DeleteLovely poem, it captures the timeless beauty of true love.
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteLovely poem entwined with nature's beauty!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nithya. :)
DeleteAs always..soulful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteGorgeous!!
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
Delete"Reflect" too ..(Y)
ReplyDeleteyes, thanks. :)
DeleteNicely done. Very romantic.
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteI can picture this, especially:
ReplyDelete"An old tree became witness."
It makes me think about ALL the things she might have witnessed over the years...the stories in her bark.
Clouds melt - what a sublime image.
DeleteThanks a lot De and Anne.
Delete"Clouds melt
ReplyDeleteand kiss the earth..."
LOVE that metaphor. The whole poem is beautiful.
Love the verse about the waterfall. Wow! Great poem, Payal!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rod. :)
DeleteScattered beauty here and there like Golden autumn leaves......
ReplyDeleteThanks dada. :)
DeleteWonderful!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku. Although sometimes i don't like those engraving of love, but here you portrayed it beautifully :)
ReplyDeletePleasure to have you on board, Payal