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| Mussoorie, 2015 |
It was a cold day
Wild Dahlias were awake
on the mountain slopes.
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On the mountain slopes
while romancing with nature
heart is filled with joy.
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heart is filled with joy
I count breath in syllables
contemplative trance.
~~payal~~
haiku my heart
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Payal, the choice of words makes it such a beautiful ,unique and capturing moment. Words that possess the soul:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Vishal. :)
DeleteBeautifully written, Payal.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Celestine. :)
DeleteHow delightful are your cascading haiku ~ love that heart is filled with joy!
ReplyDeleteHappy Weekend to you,
artmusedog and carol
Thanks Carol. :)
DeleteTrances, especially contemplative ones, can be not only pleasurable, but also beneficial.
ReplyDeleteIndeed! Thank you so much. :)
DeleteHow lovely Payal! Your haiku fits right into that gorgeous photo of the wild dahlias dancing on the hillside!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Lea. :)
DeleteWild Dahlias on a mountainside would lull me into a trance as well.
ReplyDeleteThat sounds great! Thank you so much. :)
Deletejust reading your words and seeing the photo put me in a trance with nature. Love this!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot! :)
DeleteWhat beautiful images you conjured. I always feel closer to God in such lovely settings.
ReplyDeleteSo do I Kathy. Thanks. :)
DeleteI don't know what I like better, the soft mattress of flowers or the soft cushion of the words. But being greedy, I think I will take both.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad. Thanks a lot! :)
DeleteI prefer your Second person poems better than first person.
ReplyDeletethanks. :)
Deleteyour haiku and love of nature have transported me! thank you payal!
ReplyDeleteMany Thanks to you Rebecca. :)
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks. :)
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