A story # Day 22, OctPoWriMo Challenge,2013

               The prompt was a photo by Rodney Smith

Unconsciously,
Screams of the soul.. 
Got trapped
In its own reflections.. 
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Locked within
Sharing space
With haunting shadows,
Choked to death..
Lost! Am I?
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Walking on water
Nowhere to go..
Echo of the souls
I feel free..
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In this moment,
Solitary..
I owe you,
Many more,
Songs of love!
 ~~payal~~

4 thoughts of 17 syllables each..combined to form a story..

5 comments:

  1. :
    "Walking on water
    Nowhere to go..
    Echo of the souls
    I feel free.."... :)

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  2. lovely..you have used the seventeen syllables quite well to create a story.

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  3. Each one a morsal of wonder. X

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  4. Took my breath away! Loved it!

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