Every moment is magical..
Each situation has
Something to offer.
Take it,
Or leave it..
“Be Original!”
You said with grey tones.
“Ok!”
Thankfully, I took it as
A learning opportunity.
Poetry was eager
To go with the flow..
To feel the feelings
As they were,
To paint emotions
With my madness
On the canvas of mood..
Then..
My journey began
With some baby steps
“Untitled!”
Drinking from “A Cup Of
Nectar”
Followed by “A Rendezvous with Myself.”
~~payal~~
P.S. "A Cup Of Nectar" and "A Rendezvous with Myself " were my first steps in the world of poetry.
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I love this.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poet you are.
Really.
Looking forward to reading more from you.
Lovely, especially the poem title ending.
ReplyDeleteTo paint emotions with my madness on the canvas of mood.. Superb!
ReplyDeleteShah
http://shahscribbles.wordpress.com/2013/10/03/octpowrimo-2013-a-gift/#comments
nice lines payal.
ReplyDeleteI am not very happy about the last verse. " Then....my journey......myself. A cup of Nectar ( ? ) a symbol ?
ReplyDeleteOtherwise this poem shows how you are destined to be a poet almost like sufi poets " Who painted emotions with madness ."
"Be original" you said with grey tones....
ReplyDeleteI sense from this line and the tone of the rest of the poem that you prefer writing rainbows instead of grey! I like this!
and so the journey began..
ReplyDeleteweaving emotions and painting moods
like a flowing river..
Thank you Lady Whispers, vivinfrance,Shah Wharton, Philo, Dada, Seekingmeme and Deepti..
ReplyDeleteAmazing
ReplyDeleteglad to have found you
Followed by “A Rendezvous with Myself.”..loved the lines
*on the canvas of mood* loved that line. Well done, I enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteA bouquet of thoughts expressed beautifully :)
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