2011 image,Mussoorie
Love is like..
The moon,
A child’s fantasy and
A poet’s muse!
Love is like..
A Book,
That rests on the bosom,
As the reader falls asleep..
Love Is like..
A mother’s lap,
Comforting and Soothing,
Where we always find relief.
Love is like..
Few sparkling gems,
Who enter our life,
We call them friends.
Love is like..
Seasoned firewood,
That burns and give warmth,
On a cold winter night.
Love is like..
The steep slopes,
Muddy and slippery,
With wild flowers on the edges.
Love is like...
A tear drop,
That create the rainbows,
In the deep ocean..
~~payal~~
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Love is... Uffff the last verse
ReplyDeletea crescendo in an opera.
I believe you could do without the word " LIKE "
Killer closing lines ;)
ReplyDeleteLove! and nothing more to say :)
ReplyDeleteWow this was beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteI love the nature references, it's the way I composed my poem today as well! Great imagery!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ivo,Amiyo da,Prats,Sunita,Lady Whisper and Quinnpg....:)
ReplyDeleteLove is all around us...
ReplyDeletefeel it..
:)
A favorite stanza:
ReplyDelete" Love is like..
Seasoned firewood,
That burns and give warmth,
On a cold winter night.
Lovely job with this. Thank you. xoA