Feathers..#Day 10,OctPoWriMo Challenge,2013




                                                            2012 image,Goa

Is it all right,
To rewrite dreams?
Despite fears
Flight and feathers.

Now you decide.
It’s inside job.
Replied the bird.
Hiding in woods.
~~payal~~

“Than Bauk” Poem Form Structure:  (x.=ryhming word, 4 syllables/line)
o.o.o.x.
o.o.x.o.
o.x.o.o.
x.o.o.o.
Inspired by Misky's poem,"Love's Path"

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7 comments:

  1. Deepti AgarwalOctober 10, 2013

    wow...

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  2. yikiciOctober 10, 2013

    Really love this. :)

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  3. Lady WhispersOctober 11, 2013

    Wow so much said in so little words.
    Loved it.

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  4. The EnchantressOctober 11, 2013

    it's beautiful !

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  5. Amiya chatterjeeOctober 11, 2013

    Trying to discover the 'great unspoken words '
    You prove : Spoken........
    Language is for business transaction.
    Unspoken language comes from irrational HEART.

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  6. payal agarwalOctober 11, 2013

    Thanks a lot Deepti,Yikici,Ron,Lady whispers,Enchantress and dada..
    means a lot ! :)

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  7. SunitaOctober 13, 2013

    This one is amazing :)

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