Butterflies # Day 6,OctPoWriMo Challenge,2013

                                                                                                   2013 image,Goa

Thoughts.
Exquisite.
From where do they come?
These fluorescent butterflies;
Fluttering their broken wings.
Somehow, I feel them.
When I face;
Truth.
:
:
Dreams.
Illusions.
Reality check.
Banging head against the wall.
I already had enough!
Restlessness seeps in.
Dumbfounded.
Pain.
:
:
Hurt.
Nervousness.
Pure insanity.
A moment of grace bestows.
Clearing the blocks from mind.
Like never before.
Butterflies.
Free...
  ~~payal~~
P.S.  This poem has no rhyme, and is written according to syllable counts. Syllables are 1, 3, 5, 7, 7, 5, 3, and 1

3 comments:

  1. Absolutely stunning Payal ! Awesome lines" From where do they come?
    These fluorescent butterflies;
    Fluttering their broken wings."

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  2. I liked the rhythm in this poem. X

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  3. I already had enough! No .
    A poet with an immense heart can bear more pain.
    The blue butterfly is there.
    Because the irrational nurseryman
    left behind the ' blue butterfly with lost wing'
    to scribble
    such classic poems.

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