"S" for Story #Day 13,OctPoWriMo Challenge,2013



                                                         S  c  a  r  l  e  t        S  k  y
                                                  Shimmering Sea                     
                                           S  a  c  r  e  d     S  i  g  n  s
                                    S    u  n  s  e  t 
                                   Scintillating Stars,  
                                     Sings Softly

                                   Scribbled Story
                                                Shine......
                                                     Serve......
                                                         SURRENDER
                                                                 Silent Sound of
                                                                  Sweat and Struggle
                                                                      S e e d s   S o w n 
                                                                  S o i l   S a c r i f i e d
                                                                 Slipping Sands
                                                           S u n r i s e
                                                  S  e  e  k  i  n  g,
                          S   t   a   r   t  i  n  g!
                                                                   ~~payal~~                   

                   

                                                       
                                                                            

10 comments:

  1. First of all I liked its 'S' presentation..
    Secondly, almost single words weaved together ... lovely ..:)

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  2. "seeds sown soil sacrificed"... amazing line..

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  3. Oh my !! thats a brilliant shape poetry :)

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  4. Very nicely done! Superb! :)

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  5. Love the shape, and there are so many good lines. I find the last three especially uplifting: "Sunrise, seeking, starting." Every day is a new one!

    Thank you. xoA

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  6. Well done Payal ! This not just LOOKED good, it was a good read too.

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