2013 image,Goa
As I go back in time and remember the Fall
Unprecedented thoughts wrapped in a shawl
Talks beneath the Sun of the unheard and unseen
Unfinished stories with thoughts in between
Momentary existence of the autumn leaves
Nostalgic memories as one perceives
Held with faith the memories of the phase
Ultimate surrender clears the haze
Echoing silence follow the leaves pale
Secretly revives the
forgotten tales
~~payal~~
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Some words
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Autumn with its gold whisper and some echoing silence
Forgotten tales keep coming back , like some
forgotten scent.
Magic with words,
Magic in feelings
Your poem excels you
Payal.
Thank you for motivating me..:)
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ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely acrostic poem with such a remarkably elegant image. The final line speaks to me... so important as a poet and writer, eh?
ReplyDeleteI am so glad I "met" you and hope to read many, many #OctPoWriMo poems of yours!
Beautiful acrostic poem! Looking forward to reading more from you during OctPoWriMo!
ReplyDeletewow! amazing acrostic!
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